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worst fanfic every by ~lubanimelife2:iconlubanimelife2:



My name is laura bankings Haruno. I’m 15 years old. I have beautiful black hair with red highlights. My eyes always sparkle with life or so my adoptive vrother kakashi says. I have an adoptive brother because my family was killed by the 3000 tailed demon that I now hold within my body. I recently came to Konoha because I wanted to be with my favorite cousin. My cousin Sakura. Sakura is kind and sweet but shes soo shy and this bitch HINATA is always so mean to her. I can hear Sakura cry sometimes in her sleep. I feel very sad so then I got revenge at Hinata by setting her on fire. But now I have to bring her to her house because she’s burned and her father wants her back.
“hello Larua” says Neji. He’s the nice cousin of Hinata the bitch. He’s very nice but the Hyuugas made him wear a crest that binds them together. I stare with sadness at his forhead., My opal eyes tear up.
“Neji…” I say before reaching over and hugging him. He stadns stil and then he reaches out and hgs me bak. I feel his tears on my shirt. But I let him cry anyway.
“LAURA!” I hear and I look up to see my boyfriend of 3 yrs Gaara.
“GARRA! It isn’t what it looks like” Gaara runs away and I follow him to apologize while Neji looks sadly at my back. I’m sorry neji I don’t love you like that, I whisper.
“GAARA! Please forgive me!” I cry. But gaara runs and continues running. I don’t want to hurt him after everything hes been through but I cant help but want to help everyone. My sparkling brown hair with natural red highlights flows behind me as I chase gaara.
“LAURA” I hear. I turn around to see that Sakura is behind me. She smiles sadly. ‘why did you hug neji. You know I like him” is the only thing she says before she runs away.
I stay in the middle. I had hurt so many people today I think. I run out of the konoha. I knock out all the anbu that are following me and I run towards the mountains. I need to talk to amorta the 300 tailed demon I have inside me. She consoles me.
“Laura?” I hear beside me. I see sasuke. And he looks very sad. Laura he whispers. Oh no what was my exboyfriend sasuke doing here. Sasuke we cant do this I whisper because I have gaara and because sakura is still in love with him. He smiles his broken smile and kisses me.
“laura you slut” I hear and turn to see Gaara. I turn wide eyed. Don’t talk to her that way sasuke says. They start fighting. I cant bear for them to fight so I run into the middle. They both stop. Gaara I whipser. I cant do this. You thought I cheated on you with neji. You don’t trust me. Tell Kakashi that I’m sorry. I should have stayed. But even though hes my big brother I cant resist sasuke,
I run away with Sasuke to sound and we start to revive the uchiha clan. I smile when I hear that Sakura and neji got together. Then I hear hinata died. I cry because even though she was mean she didn’t deserve to die I think. But then I hear that gaara killed himself . I cry saying its my fault but sasuke comforts me saying its not. Then I start going into labor.
“LAURA” Sasuke cries when his wife dies during the birth of their child. He gives up the baby for adoption and leaves to live in the forest without the beauty luara by his side.
©2008-2009 ~lubanimelife2
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Author's Comments

:iconice--crystal: and the :iconanti-mary-sue-club: had a contest lol. it was fun. :)
Some of the things here were really dumb. xD

laura/luara/larua belongs to the minds of sick fangirls.

And no I don't hate Hinata.

everyone else...created by the creator of naruto.

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:iconice--crystal:
:clap: wonderful!!!

I almost cried at the end, it was sooo sad... actually, no :D Maybe one of the most stick-to-the-reality fic I've got until now. I mean, she's a Mary Sue for sure, and the characters are so OOC but at least this one talks about feelings. Not "I'm f*cking the whole Konoha and no one cares" =p

I especially love the Hinata/Sakura OOC-ness :giggle:

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omg!!!!! teh ending mad3 me cry!!!!1!!!!11

Lol. Good job! It made my eyes bleed :D

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Thank you. it made me sad too. lol

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I know. laura is a slut. xD

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The fallowing review is me being stupid and should not be taken seriously:

300 tailed demon huh… I wonder if her butt hurts from having so many tails :XD:

Soooo Hinata’s a bitch and Sakura’s a sweet shy girl…
Are you sure you don’t have them mixed up?

OMG POOR GAARA!!! –hugs Gaara- you can have MEEEE Gaara you don’t need that OTHER girl ;p

Ok end of review

WOW THAT WAS AMAZING!!! I loved it!! these horrible fics keep me soooo happy!!!!! :love:

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I'm sorry. I wanted to make Sakura a bitch. But I love her too much. XD

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lol. Thanks.

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Trying to fav this, but it keeps erroring, so just pretend that it's faved, 'kay?

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February 8, 2008
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